Yeah the marsh gas in the second shot is a world of improvement, but:
1. Lose the screenshots, they kill the atmos.
2. This sounds pedantic, but try putting 'If you go into the woods tonight' on one line.
3. Try doing a VERY mild blur on the Tommy logo just to take the edge off a bit.
I'm going to go against the concensus and say I prefer the way you have it. Sticking Tommy in would spoil the composition, IMO.
Looks really professional. Well done!
1. Lose the screenshots, they kill the atmos.
2. This sounds pedantic, but try putting 'If you go into the woods tonight' on one line.
3. Try doing a VERY mild blur on the Tommy logo just to take the edge off a bit.
I'm going to go against the concensus and say I prefer the way you have it. Sticking Tommy in would spoil the composition, IMO.
Looks really professional. Well done!