Would it not be easier to just take a photo of a desk with a pad and paper on it?
Don't get me wrong, what you've done looks quite pretty, but you've got some weird really thick parchment with edges that aren't really torn or cut. And looks like it's floating a couple of millimetres above the table. And with this rough look has a perfectly formed Times like font.
Then next to it you've got a cartoon notepad which has lines so clean it just doesn't match the rough of the parchment thingy. And yet has hand written style font.
It just doesn't 'fit' in my opinion, I think photographing the same scene and getting the computer to interact with it would be consistant to the hand written feel of the notepad. I don't know if the parchment is supposed to be printed or hand written, if it's printed then surely it wouldn't be a thick torn olde worlde thing...
It just seems a bit confused to me.
Don't get me wrong, what you've done looks quite pretty, but you've got some weird really thick parchment with edges that aren't really torn or cut. And looks like it's floating a couple of millimetres above the table. And with this rough look has a perfectly formed Times like font.
Then next to it you've got a cartoon notepad which has lines so clean it just doesn't match the rough of the parchment thingy. And yet has hand written style font.
It just doesn't 'fit' in my opinion, I think photographing the same scene and getting the computer to interact with it would be consistant to the hand written feel of the notepad. I don't know if the parchment is supposed to be printed or hand written, if it's printed then surely it wouldn't be a thick torn olde worlde thing...
It just seems a bit confused to me.