Not bad, but there are some language errors. Also you should mention something appealing about the gameplay - some unique quality that makes your game worth buying. What I mean is: Butterflies and flowers (for example) aren't going to attract many people to your game. If you can do something fun with the butterflies and flowers (like fly around on the butterflies or bounce around on the the flowers as if they were trampolines) then you might be on to something.
Lights of Dreams reinvented
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