Very nice! I just played through all the levels, it looks like Wonderland and sometimes a bit like Hopmon. Here are a few comments:
- First of all, this game needs an undo button!
- Nice celshading! But for more consistency in the graphics, I think you should use it everywhere.
- TBH, I think your color combinations are terrible! (but that's taste I guess).
- Switching from one player to the other could be a bit slower, it is very sudden now.
- The water could use some animation, shouldn't be very hard.
- I think in general levels should always have ways to get back to places where you might have forgotten something earlier, unless it's part of the puzzle to block an area away (for example in level 6, why prevent the player from going back to the beginning?).
- Let someone have a look at the English grammar of some of your texts.
- It would perhaps be nice to have a way to look around in the level.
Anyway, good luck with it, I'm sure there are lots of people who will buy a game like this.
- First of all, this game needs an undo button!
- Nice celshading! But for more consistency in the graphics, I think you should use it everywhere.
- TBH, I think your color combinations are terrible! (but that's taste I guess).
- Switching from one player to the other could be a bit slower, it is very sudden now.
- The water could use some animation, shouldn't be very hard.
- I think in general levels should always have ways to get back to places where you might have forgotten something earlier, unless it's part of the puzzle to block an area away (for example in level 6, why prevent the player from going back to the beginning?).
- Let someone have a look at the English grammar of some of your texts.
- It would perhaps be nice to have a way to look around in the level.
Anyway, good luck with it, I'm sure there are lots of people who will buy a game like this.