Looks pretty good, L_Draven! :) Keep up the good work, and hope to see more on this as it comes along.
Also, I thought it was "Abashed the devil stood, and felt how awful goodness is." ? No matter, I knew exactly where it was from before I got to the end of the sentence :P
Also, I thought it was "Abashed the devil stood, and felt how awful goodness is." ? No matter, I knew exactly where it was from before I got to the end of the sentence :P