PickleYourFancy Brand Pickles are the world's most flavorful Peppered Pickles.
--At PickleYourFancy, we make the most flavorful peppered pickles in the world!
Made fresh to order using only the freshest hand-picked vegetables and natural ingredients - no preservatives. Unlike common brands, PickleYourFancy Pickles are not allowed to stagnate for months.
You used the word 'fresh' twice in the same sentence.
--We handpick only the freshest vegetables and natural ingredients. No preservatives here! Perfectly aged, zesty, zingy, crunchy, blam! You're gonna love em'!
They are shipped immediately after all the ingredients combined and only require one week to mature.
This makes it sould like you put all the ingredients in and ship them out. Then the people have to let the pickles sit for a week before they can eat them.
I'd leave that part out imo.
PickleYourFancy Brand Pickles combine Key Lime, Jalapeño & Habanero Chili Peppers, Sweet Onion, PepperCorn, and Garlic for a Spicy, Tangy, Mildly Sweet Flavor you will not experience anywhere else.
--Our gourmet peppered pickles are a zesty blend of Key Lime, Jalapeno & Habanero Chili Peppers, Sweet Onion, Peppercorn, and Garlic that leave your tastebuds screaming for more.
--We know you're gonna love these pickles! And if you don't love them, we'll give you your money back. Get to crunching!
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Also I would contact a gourmet food shop or even a wal-mart or specialty food shop and get your pickles on a store shelf. Word of mouth is a powerful adertisement tool.