1.You need a shadow along the front where the shirt and skin meet... as of now it appears to be a texturing flaw, which probably isn't your intention. Try to make that shirt pop out more since it is over the skin. Also try to make it seem more like cloth... I'm just having a very hard time with the shirt and skin/tearing flesh being on the same plane.
2. The jeans seem like they were just bought, very pristine. Did someone actually sell this zombie some pants? Dirty them up a bit, add some blood and make them look like they are aged.
3. His neck seems to be 'too white' compared to his head and arms. It could be that shirt again that's making it hard to tell it's really a shirt!
Otherwise, I like the character, pretty creepy. I can imagine that thing sprinting at me in a hall scaring the living crap out of me.
2. The jeans seem like they were just bought, very pristine. Did someone actually sell this zombie some pants? Dirty them up a bit, add some blood and make them look like they are aged.
3. His neck seems to be 'too white' compared to his head and arms. It could be that shirt again that's making it hard to tell it's really a shirt!
Otherwise, I like the character, pretty creepy. I can imagine that thing sprinting at me in a hall scaring the living crap out of me.