here is my review of your review. ;)
first of all, when you write say "It’s got stars in it?" you should write "That it’s got stars in it?" it's just one word but is so much easier to read. I thought the rest of your review would be similarly erratic, but it wasn't actually, it was very informative. good job.
also, i would have liked to see a rating system, like on gamespot, etc. i'm used to going straight to the rating to get a general overview of how good the game is before i decide to spend the time to read the article.
first of all, when you write say "It’s got stars in it?" you should write "That it’s got stars in it?" it's just one word but is so much easier to read. I thought the rest of your review would be similarly erratic, but it wasn't actually, it was very informative. good job.
also, i would have liked to see a rating system, like on gamespot, etc. i'm used to going straight to the rating to get a general overview of how good the game is before i decide to spend the time to read the article.