Just a bit of editing:
In the last screenshot, where it says "but dangerous to the player if their inside the blast radius," the text needs to be changed to be grammatically correct. "Their" means belonging to lots of people; "they're" (the contraction for "they are") is the proper spelling. Some modern grammarians will accept the number difference ("player" is singular, "they" is plural) to be politically correct, but it really should be "dangerous to the player if he is inside" or, at least (if you want to be PC), "dangerous to the player if he or she is inside"...
You'd be surprised how much difference a little polish makes in a game (or, conversely, how much minor mistakes catch the eye and detract from a game). Didn't know whether you already knew and were going to polish later (though I've always found that to be harder... I forget to come back to everything), or had missed it.
In the last screenshot, where it says "but dangerous to the player if their inside the blast radius," the text needs to be changed to be grammatically correct. "Their" means belonging to lots of people; "they're" (the contraction for "they are") is the proper spelling. Some modern grammarians will accept the number difference ("player" is singular, "they" is plural) to be politically correct, but it really should be "dangerous to the player if he is inside" or, at least (if you want to be PC), "dangerous to the player if he or she is inside"...
You'd be surprised how much difference a little polish makes in a game (or, conversely, how much minor mistakes catch the eye and detract from a game). Didn't know whether you already knew and were going to polish later (though I've always found that to be harder... I forget to come back to everything), or had missed it.