I'm afraid that I agree with Noel here. The setting is hopelessly hackneyed. There may be a finite number of stories and themes, but you've mixed them in a very uncreative, uninteresting and generic way.
I know this sounds brutal, and probably bruising to the ego, but it's better to hear this sort of honest feedback while it is still early enough to do something about it.
I know this sounds brutal, and probably bruising to the ego, but it's better to hear this sort of honest feedback while it is still early enough to do something about it.