The problem is the inconsistency of the art style. If all the characters were done in that way, including the main character, that style would work great because the game's art direction would have consistency. This screen however is weird looking because it's inconsistent, with a fully 3D character and a 2D character.
Mind you, if they were meant to be distinct the inconsistency would work. But I'm assuming they're both supposed to be regular people (as opposed to, say, a regular person and a magic spirit.)
Oh, and whatever you decide to do, the fact that the woman is semi-transparent is just odd. It makes her look like a ghost.
Mind you, if they were meant to be distinct the inconsistency would work. But I'm assuming they're both supposed to be regular people (as opposed to, say, a regular person and a magic spirit.)
Oh, and whatever you decide to do, the fact that the woman is semi-transparent is just odd. It makes her look like a ghost.