I know English isn't your first language, but prefixing "dear" onto customers or other words (as you have done in email to me) comes off a little weird. Just leave that out and you'll sound more native.
I know you're just trying to sound friendly, but honestly, it comes off a little creepy.
Just a friendly tip. :)
I know you're just trying to sound friendly, but honestly, it comes off a little creepy.
Just a friendly tip. :)