Looking good, much better than before. All I can say is try to get the lighting of the characters to contrast less with their environment. And you need a 'fault line' at the start of the lane (which your foot shouldn't touch or go over or something, I dunno the rules).
A nice addition would be a crowd that stand around you as you bowl and cheer or boo :) and some more extra scenery bits, like a fast food counter, plants and stuff would really give it life
A nice addition would be a crowd that stand around you as you bowl and cheer or boo :) and some more extra scenery bits, like a fast food counter, plants and stuff would really give it life