Bored - Need constructive critisism

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The corner above the 2702 looks weird. I'd cut that jutty-out bit off so the front just goes up at an angle.

It's a bit bland color wise. Some more color variaton would be nice, even if it were only camoflage of varying browns.

I might make the exhaust pipe's top a little taller before it curves over.

The gun itself is very boring. It needs some more variation in it's shape. That first side view illustrates that. Perhaps though it just needs to have a narrower barrel. It may njust be that there's not enough change in width between the barrel and the endpeice.

I like the flag, but not that color, and not with the metal bar going across the top of it. The base of the antenna could use some work. I would consider making the flag red or orange... something to go with the logo on the side. In fact, I'd consider making the whole tank red or ornage, cause that logi on the side says "cartoon tank" to me.

I might tone doown the brightness of the numbers on the side. They're too starkly white.

Hm... Actually I see on the front now that that sticky out bit has the lights on it. That's problematic. Cause I like the lights.

Oh and the door in the side is impossible with the way that you have the treads set up. Unless they're just an access hatch to get to the treads to service them.

I might make the bottom of the tank go up in the middle to make that more interesting and show the wheels of the treads off more.

I'd think about the shape of that periscope thing, the top is a bit sharp.


It's a nice tank, don't get me wrong. I don't know if the suggestions I made will actually make it look better, I often have to experiment a lot with stuff to get it to look right, and iy is possible to overwork a peice of art. I usually end up overworking my stuff and then taking a step back and realising the right place is somewhere between where I started "fixing" it and where I ended up.