i think the flaw is the fact that you are using a description 'of' something
words like quake or polaroid or xerox, or warcraft are legends not just because they are good games/products but because they are words that represent the product.
If you called your game 'heroes' it may have more of an effect than a description of the players in a place. ie heroes of ****
Just a thought. Game looks good. What kind of frame rates are u getting on it? graphics look great. kind of anime feel to it. nice job.
words like quake or polaroid or xerox, or warcraft are legends not just because they are good games/products but because they are words that represent the product.
If you called your game 'heroes' it may have more of an effect than a description of the players in a place. ie heroes of ****
Just a thought. Game looks good. What kind of frame rates are u getting on it? graphics look great. kind of anime feel to it. nice job.